"Actions Speak Louder than Words" by Jimie Press the story drama that is winning my heart because it is bring me to the situation in the story. Jamie's writing have a great plot and make it easy for the reader to understand because he put the understand-able words or vocabulary that help whoever start studying English Literature. Jamie put more than one place and case, but in case when the main character tells about school makes me pretty bored because there is too long for me to read.
In this story Jamie used advanced plot and quite simple story of tragedy. The beginning of the story is tells about the worst condition of the college's corridor, the bag, papers, folders everywhere, in another corridor we can read there's not moving bodies lying on the floor, it means "dead." Jamie also lead us to classrooms and library, in the classrooms desk and chairs have been kicked over, push out the way, there is died body too behind the desk and some students with their teacher hiding from the main character, Kevin. Then in library, Aaron, 16th years old the second characters hiding underneath the desk and looks terrified. Aaron did not have courage to move from where he hiding.
Point of view of Aaron is the beginning of the conflict, there is female characters speak louder "Oh my God. Please, no, I don't want to die. Please. No!" But the sound of the gunshot "BANG" makes Aaron jump. In parallel female voice no longer present. Aaron is more terrified and his breathing more quickly. Aaron keep quiet at that time, but the the foot steps going too close to Aaron, when the footsteps stop, head appears and Aaron meet Kevin, the innocent boy.
Kevin, young man who still carry a gun in his hand started talking to Aaron, "Not bad, huh? It’s my Dads. He always tried to hide it in places that he thought I didn’t know about." Aaron keep hiding while Kevin talk. Awkward silence between them. Aaron doesn’t know what to say.
Kevin looks at Aaron and start to make conversation, the problem of the story is begin. Kevin told the school is unfair and worst place he ever knew he had the lowest grades in all subjects, and it causes by the teacher, in connection with situation Aaron bravely make conversation with Kevin to kill time until the cops come.
In eight-page-lenght of the story,
-Aaron-
Why don’t you and your Dad talk
with the school? Maybe they can
help you. I’m sure your Dad will be
willing to help.
KEVIN
(beat)
My Dad passed away.
Aaron is speechless. He’s not lucky today is he.
KEVIN (CONT’D)
He had a heart-attack when I was
ten. It’s just me and my Mom now.
AARON
Why don’t you get your Mom to help
you then?
KEVIN
(beat)
Because I hate her.
(beat)
We don’t like each other. She
doesn’t like me and I don’t like
her - period.
Kevin told that he was hate his mother because she never respect to him, In this case we know Kevin have mental breakdown because the family and his circle does not support him while he suffering to be better not only in school but also in family.
In the end of the story I feel sorry for Kevin because he thinks his life is not worth it to continued.
KEVIN (CONT’D)
What’s my life worth? Huh? Why am I
here? What did God put me on this
earth for? Everything in my life
has just been turned on it’s head.
People hate me. People screw me.
What did I ever do to them?
AARON
You didn’t do anything to them. You
don’t deserve any of that happening
to you. Nobody does. I know this
might now help you but trust me
when I say “it does get better”.
KEVIN
(chuckles)
Yeah, right, okay then.
AARON
It really does. There’s times in
life when we go through some really
terrible shit. But eventually all
the terrible shit is put aside and
you move forward in life. We’re
still young, we’ve got our whole
lives ahead of us. That’s what we
need to keep remembering.
KEVIN
You ever heard of the saying
“actions speak louder than words”?
AARON
Yes. Of course.
KEVIN
It’s never been more true. For
years and years I’ve told people
about my life. For years, I’ve told
people about everything but yet,
nothing happens. It’s like in
school. When a kid is getting
bullied he goes and tells a
teacher. That teacher would then
tell the bully to stop, even though
he says he will, he never does. He
just comes back and does it even
more. But if that kid who was
getting bullied never told the
teacher and instead turned around
and decked the bully with a right
hand then the bullying would stop
straight away.
(beat)
Actions....speak louder....than
words.
AARON
(beat)
Is that why you’re doing this?
Kevin doesn’t answer. He looks at Aaron. Awkward silence.
KEVIN
Go.
Aaron doesn’t quite believe he just heard them words.
Kevin anger getting bigger, he blame himself because he'd killed people in the school also he thought he failed at life. At the end he decided to suicide after Aaron leave.
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